In this engaging episode of Hens Full of Fiction, host Katie Judy takes listeners on a unique journey through the world of indie publishing by reviewing the first chapter of a submitted manuscript from author Colin Cerniglia. This episode highlights HenDragon Press's commitment to supporting authors through services like developmental editing, proofreading, and beta reading, showcasing how first chapter critiques can provide invaluable insights into the writing process.
As Katie dives into Colin's rock star-themed narrative, she emphasizes the crucial role of a compelling opening chapter in capturing readers' attention. With a lively description of a band performance at a summer festival, listeners will be drawn into the vibrant atmosphere and the dynamics between band members. Katie shares her thoughts on the strengths of the chapter, including the author's voice and the clever chapter titles, while also offering constructive feedback on character development and musical clarity.
Join Katie as she explores the intricacies of writing, the importance of defining genre elements, and the potential for character conflict in this captivating rock and roll story.
This episode is not only a treat for aspiring authors but also a fascinating glimpse into the editorial process at HenDragon Press.
(00:00) HenDragon Press does first chapter reviews for indie authors
(02:07) This is a story about rock stars, and I absolutely loved reading it
(03:05) The first chapter of the book is written by Colin Cerniglia
(07:05) There are elements in this book that I felt required attention or improvement
(13:17) Notes on the language and diction really weren't needed here, unless we knew the time period
🗣️ Quotes from Katie Judy
"First chapters are the most important job for an author. We need to hook the reader with a great opening."
"The energy and voice of the main character really drew me in."
"I anticipate that there's going to be a make or break moment with Olivia just based on this tension in the beginning."
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Katie Judy is a passionate advocate for authors and the indie publishing community. With a keen eye for storytelling and a love for music, she brings her expertise to the table as she helps authors navigate the complexities of writing and publishing. When she's not critiquing first chapters, Katie enjoys exploring new literary works and connecting with fellow creatives.
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